as you said this is NOT very good
i am not a great animator, and by professional standards i still suck, so don't feel bad, but as you well know, so i won't reiterate this too much, this was not very good. first and fore most, please work on your voice acting/editing. what i heard was simply a garble version of what might have been pitch changed vocals, but none of it was intelligible. as far as animation itself was concerned... well ive seen better done on ms paint. i'm not trying to be mean, just honest.
my advice would be to watch all of the tutorials at your disposal. as well watch the videos by your favorite flash artists again and again.. and again. understand what they do to create their animations, and even if you can't do what they do, strive to try. animation is a hard field and it takes a lot of devotion and time, that's why they get paid a lot of the time to do it. yet moreover an animator must love to create, an animator must be willing to devote their life to the pursuit of bringing their imagination to life. that is the only way that animators can create what they do, because it takes a lot of life to make only a five second image of life.
now that i have given my rant, i just want to say, that yes this was really bad, but don't give up, if you want to create, never give up. just spend almost all of what you used to call a life learning the trade, and then learn more.
oh and although your animation was bad, mad respect. why? because you put something out their. that is the first step to getting better,
any way, man
best of luck,
keep on going no matter what negative reviews you get,
and one day you too could be one of the greatly respected flash animators!
the-mega-god